Wednesday, June 6, 2018

2.5. HOT SALE

# SHIP'S CREW LOUNGE. Old, patched up, spacious, full of MACHINERY. Low light. Consoles display trajectories, messages, data...

CAPTION:
         Transport Ship
        Hauling Business        .

FADE IN:
Chartered to undisclosed location

Around a tactical/dinner TABLE:

LIMMAR

(late 50s, expansive)

... so I was dragged into the Duke's Throne Room, with all that precious wood, and the Courtiers and their Ladies and their jewels, and that traitorous oafish Chamberlain accuses me of scamming him!


Sipping his Guild-Regulation Beverages Container:

BRO (early 20s, sotto)

Hard to believe he's one of the most veteran Traders.


BALE

(mid 20s)

Been 'round since the Guild formed, I heard.


LIMMAR

(eyes closed)

The Knights of the Guard all pointed their swords and spears at me, while the Duke explained at length how a man's word was his life's breath, and how I, a foreign low-born friendless Peddler, was gonna be beheaded for my foolish daring!


Sipping his FLASK:

BALE (sotto)

Now we know why he's called 'Legendary'!


BRO

(chuckles)

By Hardin, each time he tells it, the tale grows!


Sotto, to the others:

PIX

(tall woman, late 20s)

Shut up and learn from the man, you 2!


LIMMAR

(grins)

Then I activated my lucky charm, hidden inside my silver Medallion!

(sips his DRINK)

There we were, the Chamberlain and me, in glorious life-size holovid, arguing about how he was, or was not, going to pay me for my Nucleics, because the simpletons of the Court were too dumb to look for proof beyond his word!


PIX

We're lucky he agreed to lead our Expedition, so the Guild sponsored us rookies with ship and all. Who cares if he embellishes his accounts!?


Reconsidering:

BALE

Got a lot of Contracts under his belt...


BRO

Never ended below Quota. Could sell a shirt to Seldon's statue...


LIMMAR

The Duke tried to touch the images, but his hand went right thru my ghost's body... All their faces went pale with fright!

(laughs)

All except my accuser, red with rage as he drew his golden Poignard, and his cousin, the Leader of the Guard, blue with fury as he smacked his own kin down to the ground!

(THUMPS the table)


Lights go RED alert. Alarms BLARE!

Console:
COLLISION
 Warning!


All getting up:

LIMMAR

Ok, partners! This is it! All to the Guns!

(pats HOLSTERED Blaster)


PIX

Where's BookWorm?

(SHOUTS around)

Del!


BRO

(shrugs?)

Must be somewhere. Reading? Something.


Re: Consoles:

BALE

He's ok. Lifesigns all right. Relax, big sis.


They run OUT.





-+-        HOT SALE        -+-



* SPACE. YELLOW-ORANGE-BROWN PLANET with some DARKGREEN, surrounded by an extensive CLOUD of dust/gravel/debris. In the distance, a shiny YELLOW-WHITE sun.

A big boxy/modular CARGO SHIP carefully APPROACHES, modest point-defenses (kinetic, Blasters) ZAPPING dangerous big rocks, letting smaller ones (harmlessly) HIT its discreetly SHIELDED hull.

CAPTION:
 Virgin territory, outside
the Foundation's Convention

FADE IN:
    Population: UNKNOWN



# SHIP's ample/utilitarian CORRIDORS. Poor light. Hull CLANGS from time to time.

Handing a PAD:

DEL

(early 20s)

Imperial Atlas says it was a pretty average world. There used to be dozens of Satellites and Stations: Weather, Comms, Processing... plus a bunch of automated Rock-busters.


BALE

Must have been back when Terminus was the youngest colony of the Empire. There's none left now, as the Survey hinted. Poor maintenance, accident, war?


Taking the PAD:

LIMMAR

Who knows, anything's possible in the decades since the Empire was last around. But we got what they need, and they got plenty minerals and other resources.


BRO

Less than expected, at least in the asteroids we've scanned. Maybe others got here first. Perhaps Pirates!

(PLAYS with his Blaster)


Re: her PAD:

PIX

No Ultrawave emitters nearby. EM freqs too scattered. Conditions on the surface have backslid significantly since the Terraform. The population could be in serious danger.


Walking forward:

LIMMAR

Good chance your speculative Deal works, then. Get unpacking, boys, while Pix and I go meet the natives.


BRO

Why her? I'm better with weapons!


BALE

I'm stronger, and better with machinery.


PIX

(smirk?)

I got better dialect skills, quite handy for my studies of de-evolved Cultures. Plus Medical training.


Reaching a SEALED AIRLOCK:

LIMMAR

Who's gonna be in charge while we're away?


PIX

Del. His guesses and calculations brought us here. He knows how everything works.


BALE

What? Sis...!


Sheepishly:

DEL

I read the Manuals...


Donning his silver Medallion:

LIMMAR

You 2 help him. Make us proud!


He CHECKS his Blaster, OPENS the airlock.

PIX (to Del)

Remember: use your Comms! If needs be, call!




* PLANET's ORBIT. Far less cluttered. The ship OPENS several small & large cargo BAYS.

A small (shielded) LIFEBOAT (not unlike a 2-seater HOVERCAR with a glass canopy) EXITS, DROPS planetwards.



* PLANET'S ATMOSPHERE. DAY. No clouds. Most of a rock/dust hemisphere in view. The LIFEBOAT descends FAST (w/out significant friction or heat). LIMMAR works Consoles.

Checking her PAD:

PIX

Magnetic field reads weakly. Air's thinner than should be. There's less Oxygen and Water vapor, lots more heat & winds.


Compensating for wind GUSTS:

LIMMAR

Hope it's not as bad as it sounds.


PIX

Infrared says there's too much Desert and Rocks down there, too little Green and Seas. No sign of any Cities yet.

(re-checking)

Got a moving heat signature, a few Ks ahead of us.


LIMMAR

(frowns)

Hmmmm... I see nothing. Could it be a rocket?


PIX

What kind of dumb fool would ride a Rocket to meet...?


Console:
Proximity
 ALERT!


Wildly BANKING/SWERVING:

LIMMAR

Boost shielding! BRACE FOR IMPACT!!


The (patched-up) MISSILE HOMES IN!

BIG EXPLOSION!! (shields FLARE)

FADE to WHITE.


BLACK FADES TO:

# DECAYED OLD ROOM/CORRIDOR. Brick/stone. No windows or furniture. Poor light.

PIX (lightly-BRUISED/bandaged) tends to LIMMAR (more bruised/BANDAGED, on a derelict MAT on the bare floor). Clothing singed/TORN, no Blasters nor jewels nor...

Trying to RISE (in vain):

LIMMAR

What.... uunnngghhh!!! ...happened?


Offering a small FLASK:

PIX

We're lucky to be alive! Drink... slowly!


As he GULPS water:

PIX

Shields deflected the worst of the radiation and heat. Gravitics cushioned our fall... barely.


LIMMAR

Where... ? When... ?


PIX

(tired)

Scavengers found us the next day, likely by the smoke... 2 days ago.

(gestures)

These tunnels are their Camp. Or one of their foraging sites, I'm not sure.


SEARCHING himself:

LIMMAR

(alarmed)

Where's my gear... Shield, Comms!?


PIX

(sad)

Scavenged. Same as mine and the remains of our Lifeboat. They use some kind of small pets as Metal Detectors, got everything!


Baring TEETH (1 of 'em GOLD, another SILVER):

LIMMAR

Not everything! But... the Ship... the others!?


PIX

(shrugs)

They must have received our crash Beacon... eventually. We're now too far from there, and you need to recover before moving.


LIMMAR

(frowns)

Are we... prisoners?


PIX

Not exactly. I earned some goodwill helping these... Peasants decipher our Medkit, tending to some of their ill...

(TENDS to him)

But when I tried to find an exit to this labyrinth, they brought me back, explaining only that travel is impossible under the day's murderous heat.


LIMMAR

Then, by night?


PIX

Not without dangers, either, including nasty predators, and the certainty of getting lost without guide or map, thus facing the sun without refuge and no easy way to get water either, in a region that hasn't seen rain in years...


LIMMAR

Galaxy! We cannot stay cooped down here indefinitely!


PIX

(half-smile)

We won't. In a few days, 'Authorities' will come take us to their Leaders.


LIMMAR

Good! That'll be our chance!


PIX

Maybe. Maybe not. These people know nothing of their past. They're incredibly superstitious, say we're special because we fell from the sky in a ball of fire.


LIMMAR

(half-smile)

Ain't that the truth. Helped by someone's ordnance.


PIX

It could have been any of several sides in a war that's gone on for 3 or 4 generations at least.


LIMMAR

(intense)

What kind of war? With what weapons? What for? Does it encompass the whole planet or just a part?


PIX

No clue. Perhaps the Leaders know. Trouble is, they also claim to be special because their Forebears came from the sky atop pieces of stars.


LIMMAR

I see... We'll have to offer 'em a Deal they can't refuse!




# * UNDERGROUND STONE-Y RAMP'S MOUTH. NIGHT. Minimal lighting. LIMMAR & PIX, hands CHAINED, with a few 'helpers', EXIT it, WALK towards a ROW of SOLDIERS armed with SWORDS, SPEARS, flechette GUNS, a scavenged Blaster...

CAPTION:
A WEEK LATER

Landscape pretty DESERTED, with a few stunted plants, no signs of animal life, LOW MOUNTAINS on the horizon. A gazillion fixed STARS ornament the CLOUDLESS sky.

An OLD WOMAN approaches, puts a bit of FOOD in PIX's hands.

As LIMMAR looks UP:

A shiny little 'star' MOVES slightly SIDEWAYS.



* SHEER ROCK WALL. DAWN (not a cloud in the sky). In the shadows at its feet, on a low rock platform, amid ROWS of carved STONE COLUMNS, each chained to 1:

LIMMAR

A week of night-trekking that scorched wasteland, for this!


PIX

I can't believe they care nothing for their planet's habitability, only want weapons!


LIMMAR

That's Warlords for you, dear. Always ready to sacrifice their subjects, like most tyrants.


PIX

Small minds, drowning in their own mud.

(looks UP)

Unlike that magnificent... thing.


Re: towering complex STONE/METALLOY/GLASS 'sculpture' halfway up the wall, SHINING with sunlight:

LIMMAR

A remnant of more enlightened times, no doubt. From a Solar Observatory, most likely. Explains that.


Re: on the far side, a miniature solar disc PROJECTION slowly/imperceptibly CRAWLS the STONE FLOOR.

PIX

Fascinating! Those are lenses!?


LIMMAR

Precisely aligned, I'd bet. You can make out the Corona and even some Spots.

(double-checks)

Hmmm... it gets bigger, and closer, as the sun rises.


PIX

C'mon! Tell me it isn't coming for us!


FAINT yet widening BURN TRAILS on the ground HINT just that.

The projection BRIGHTENS, develops TINY vapor WISPS.

LIMMAR

They're obsessed with the sun. It's only natural they use it for their Ceremonies.


TUGGING against her BONDS:

PIX

(upset)

This is their 'Trial of the Gods'!? We should have chosen the gladiatorial fights! We're gonna die!!


LIMMAR

Afraid so. I was hoping things wouldn't come to that.

(shouts to the sky)

DIVINE SPIRIT, CREATOR AND RULER OF ALL! HEAR US IN OUR HOUR OF NEED!


PIX

(confused)

Wh...?


As dawn TURNS into morning, the projection grows, BURNS almost too hot to watch.

LIMMAR

(carrying)

THESE UNGRATEFULS MISUSE THY BLESSING OF LIGHT, HEAT, AND LIFE!


From some nearby RUINS, a Constable in full (rag-tag) Armor APPROACHES, walking fast, shadowed by a parasol-holding Attendant.

LIMMAR

THEY'RE DEVILS WHO WISH DEATH UPON THY CHILDREN, WHOM THOU ALWAYS PROTECT!


Re: the Constable:

PIX

Limmar!


LIMMAR (sotto)

Hush! Act scared!


PIX

(wide-eyed)

I am scared!


LIMMAR

AS THEY THUS FORSAKE THY GALACTIC PARADISE, I BID THEE FORSAKE 'EM!!


As the Constable gets closer, RAISES his STAFF:

LIMMAR

STRIKE THEIR STAR, WHICH THOU GAVE 'EM!


Sunlight DIMS noticeably!

PIX can't help looking UPWARDS, as do 10s of PEOPLE around the ruins. There's no apparent cause!

LIMMAR

PLUNGE THEIR WORLD INTO ETERNAL DARKNESS!


The Constable hesitates, POISED to strike, but the Attendant REFRAINS him!

The weakened yet still BURNING projection almost ON THEM:

PIX

Merciful Spirit! We're doomed!


Sunlight DIMS even more!

LIMMAR

TRUST THEIR UNREPENTANT SOULS INTO THE UNENDING COLD OF SPACE!


CLOUDS gather fast, BLOCKING most of the light while the projection harmlessly ILLUMINATES him!

More Armored WARRIORS emerge, APPROACH fast.

LIMMAR

TEAR THEIR SKY DOWN ON THEIR SINFUL HEADS!


A small LIGHTNING BOLT strikes in the distance. Then a few more, stronger, CLOSER!

The gathering people & Warriors MARVEL at the darkening clouds & EVENTS.

LIMMAR

SMITHE 'EM WHO WON'T BOW BEFORE THY SUPREME POWER!


As lightning RACES ever closer, THUNDERCLAPS & wind GUSTS multiply!

PIX (sotto)

Wow!


Fearful people start to KNEEL (incl. some Warriors). Women (high-ranking or not) PROTECT their children.

LIMMAR

TURN THE AIR THESE UNBELIEVERS BREATHE INTO ICE!


As sizable HAIL rains down on 'em, the undecided Warriors start to KNEEL too, EXCEPT:

NOBLEMAN (to Limmar)

What kind of witchcraft is this? Stop now or ...!!


He RAISES his SWORD, but his own people SWARM & RESTRAIN him!

SHIVERING in the wind:

WOMAN

Mercy! We didn't know...!


Others CHORUS her. They WAIL as lightning STRIKES nearby!

Gauging his captive audience:

LIMMAR

Will you respect the Holy Spirit? On your life, and the lives of yours?


COWERING & REELING from the hail:

WOMAN

Yes! Spare us! Please!!


The Chorus AGREES.

LIMMAR

GREAT SPIRIT, HAVE MERCY ON THOSE WHO RELEASE THY SERVANTS FROM THEIR CHAINS!


As they're FREED:

PIX

Yes!


SAVORING the moment, hands RAISED to the sky:

LIMMAR

(commanding)

TEMPER THY WRATH! POUR THY LOVE UPON THE FAITHFUL!


As Lightning, Thunder & Wind SUBSIDE, Hail turns to soft RAIN.

The cloud cover THINS a bit, allowing GLIMPSES of sunlight. People WEEP/LAUGH with relief.

PIX (sotto)

How?


LIMMAR

(winks)

Luck! And... Science!




* PLANET's ORBIT. ROWS of active Satellites. A small (shielded) SHUTTLE (not unlike a BOX with wings) DOCKS with the Trader ship. Other Tradeships in the distance.



# SHIP's MEDBAY. Modest. Well-lit. MEDICS tend to a spent-looking LIMMAR.

In a corner, EATING a ration BAR:

PIX

So that's why he mumbled so much when he thought nobody was listening! I feared isolation was driving him nuts!

(re: her BAR)

Mmhh!! I'll never complain about our food again!


Grinning:

BRO

I'll get a Comms-tooth like his at the earliest opportunity!


BALE

He Contacted when desperation was pushing us to do something stupid, like trying a rescue by force.


DEL

Or leaving... But he kept saying this mishap could become an opportunity.


BRO

Luckily we could consult his copy of Aporat's Memorandum on Effective Curses!


BALE

Hardest thing was keeping hail and lightning from killing anyone.


DEL

Disrupting their execution machine was an added bonus. Your reaction was priceless!


The medics LEAVE.

PIX

I see... But we didn't bring that many Weather Sats. And the Sun Shade!?


Re: his PAD:

BRO

Had to call in reinforcements... for a percent of future gains.


PIX

(frowns)

He risked our lives for money... I should have expected it.


DEL

(firm)

No. Not money. He's old-school: came with us to help the Primitives. Now, with most of their warring Aristocracy shocked into acquiescence or awed into cooperation, we (the Foundation) will be their most trusted Partners and Advisors.


BRO

Their Ancestors weren't so primitive: there's plenty of broken but salvageable machinery in this System.


BALE

Repeat the performance with the other Tribes, and we'll become the shadow Administrators of this sorry ball of dust, the re-Terraforming Contract just the first of many profitable Deals.


APPROACHING, adjusting his NEW silver Medallion:

LIMMAR

Traders and Priests exist to spread the Foundation's Science and influence. Economic rewards are only a happy secondary result.


BRO

Nothing wrong with getting rich while doing our Duty. Or at least pay Debts!


PIX

I'm not sure I want to become a Trader anymore, Master Ponyets, if this is what it takes...


LIMMAR

Sorry, but I've never let 'morals' keep me from doing what's right. Not every day the chance comes to save millions risking only 2 lives.


BALE

(winks)

Anyone would've done the same!


DEL

More than half the planet still needs 'saving'. That's 100s of scattered Tribes.


LIMMAR

Right. We'll try to use less dangerous displays, without losing too much 'appeal'.

(winks)

I'm getting old for these Capers.


PIX

Then what? Just call in the Priests?


LIMMAR

Once the planet's peacefied, yes. They'll help persuade those not swayed by our technologically miraculous wares.


BALE

The Guild will see to that. It's in our Contracts.


LIMMAR

They'll rebuild the Culture and ready the people to rejoin Civilized society.


PIX

Of course, but I meant... Before the end, my thoughts kept going to that Scavenger Tribe, to the good we did 'em during our short stay...

(beat)

We can do so much more now... I want to return and help 'em, if possible. They already trust me.


Hand ON her shoulder:

LIMMAR

(gentle)

The Priesthood might insist you take their Oath, to allow that.


PIX

(half-smile)

If that's what it takes...




* SPACE. A gazillion fixed STARS ornament it.

A leisurely 'TICK-TOCK' sounds (as a shiny star MOVES SIDEWAYS).



END ?



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